They are melting as an ice cream in summer

Nowadays, global warming is invading the world, glaciers melting is getting more and more frequent. If, after all the warning from scientists, politicians, ... we don't act, the rising sea level could be terrible and the hole world could be in danger.

Since 1980, scientists measured an average thickness loss of 30 reference glaciers of about 34 feet.

Over the past 250 years, human activities ( industry, ... ) emitted large quantities of carbon dioxyde, ... into the atmosphere.The gas trapped solar radiation close to the planet which cause the global temperature to rise. Indeed the rising sea level is worse and worse and is treatening to flood cities. However, take as an exemple India, there are dramatic consequences. As the matter of fact rivers are fed by the Himalayan glaciers.Since the past millenium, their average loss has increased to around 20 inches.

Are we conscious of this fact ? Do we have really(do we really have) performent solutions ? Are we acting or are we simplely getting to sit idle and watch our planet being flooded ...

Margaux Carré, 3ème C

Pas de fautes de langue majeures, a part quelques erreurs sur la fin. le sujet aurait pu être questionné différemment , dès le début de ton article par exemple. Les premiers paragraphes sont très descriptifs alors que si tes questions avaient été mieux réparties dans l'article cela en aurait facilité la lecture...
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