lundi 7 avril 2008

The race for the power, The conflict




The politic is very difficult, they have to support many conflicts, and candidates are not very friendly together.

Between John McCain and Barack Obama, the tones are going up. Barack Obama is accused (to) of being (an in) unexperimented and of knowing nothing to the national security.
In front of that, Barack Obama does not really answers (really) on that subject, but he accused John McCain to be ready to spend lots of money without any plan to (close) end up the war.
Barack Obama, if he's elected president, would maintain (in Iraq),(ordre des parties de la phrase a revoir) a sufficient numbers of soldiers to protect American embassy in Baghdad.
Even of the same party, they are many conflicts between Barack Obama and Hillary Clinton. There are (a) two democratic(s) candidates but they have a (many) small conflict.
These two candidates are playing like “cat and mouse

Choosing the best President of the United States,
This is the question!
nicolas pagliero 3c

Article intéressant Nicolas tu as su traiter le sujet de façon pertinente, les liens sont intéressants (excepté peut être le dernier qui est "hors contexte car tourné en 98) Tu aurais peut-être pu questionner un peu plus le sujet dans ton article
la dernière citation est bien trouvé !
CL 3,5/5; structure id 3/5; voc 3/5; Originalité 4,5/5
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