Barack Obama has a family. How many childrens he has(has he got)? What is the name of Obama's father and mother? When is his birthday? If you want know the answers (about) to these questions, read tis article. Barack Obama was born on the 4th of August 1961, at Honolulu in Hawaii. His father, Barack Hussein Obama Sr was kenyan. His mother, Shirley Ann Duham was the descendant of Jefferson Davis. Barack Obama has a wife, her name is Michelle and she 's jurist. He has two daughters : Malia Ann and Natasha.
Fouty(orth)-six years after his birth, he annouced the creation of a explorative commission.Twenty-five days after, he make(tps) application at the democratic investiture.

Obama impose(d) at the primary compain the theme of"change(mnent)". His new slogan is "Yes we can". He accused Bill and Hilary Clinton to distort the facts about irregularities in the vote against him.
Many celebrities support Obama. Many actors : Halle Berry, Scarlett Johansson, Clooney, Will Smith, Ben Affleck and one singer : Nicole Scherzinger.Caroline Kennedy (John's daughter) support Obama.
Obama is a candidate to the presidential election, a father and a husband. Many people and celebrities support Obama. He has one family and one compain to the presidential election.
Carra Alexandre 3°C
Article intéressant Alexandre, le fait de montrer qu' Obama est un homme et père de famille avant tout donne une certaine originalité à ton article puisque personne n'a jusque là exploité cette piste...
Attention aux fautes de temps et aux quelques fautes d'orthographe !!!
L'ensemble ets correct même si tu aurais également pu questionner le sujet un peu plus ...
CL 4/5; Structure id 3,5/5, voc 3/5, Originalité 3/5
13,5/20
Article intéressant Alexandre, le fait de montrer qu' Obama est un homme et père de famille avant tout donne une certaine originalité à ton article puisque personne n'a jusque là exploité cette piste...
Attention aux fautes de temps et aux quelques fautes d'orthographe !!!
L'ensemble ets correct même si tu aurais également pu questionner le sujet un peu plus ...
CL 4/5; Structure id 3,5/5, voc 3/5, Originalité 3/5
13,5/20
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