Remember ,when the ex-first lady asked(tps) Obama to be her vice president exchanging to stoping the race.(pourquoi un point??? la phrase doit continuer!)
Obama refused and exclaimed that he would be president and that he would make it to the end of the elections.
Opinion clearly demonstrated that if there was a democrat ticket it would be Obama-Clinton,the numbers are more telling:45% said that Obama-Clinton was acceptable against only 30% for Clinton-Obama.
But ,the chief question, is (what) which order (way)?
Nearly 1/4 of the population think that a ticket Obama-Clinton or Clinton-Obama is inacceptable.1/3 of Obama' s suporters and 1/3 of Clinton' s can' t bear this questions,they don t care.
Now,difficulties appear:
On the one hand, the race between the two candidates makes forget the republicans,John Mccain has already won,and he is preparing for the next elections between democrats and republicans.And on the other hand,the problem is if Clinton would come to won(win), young black people could restrain themselves to vote,and it could "open doors" to Mccain.And if it was Obama,old white women would noy vote for Obama.
"He isn't here to be vice president!"
The ex and recognize president,Bill Clinton said to the medias that a ticket Clinton-Obama would make them "strong",anyone could stop them!"
Obama yelled that he would go to h=the end and wouldn't let Clinton be president of USA.He said"i' m not here to become vice president,i'm the future president."
And you,what do you think of it?
Raphael Claudon,eleve de 3eC
De bons réflexes lors du traitement du sujet, la pensée est correctement hiérarchisée, les paragraphes clairs, et l'ensemble donne envie d'être lu; c'est bien.
Attention cependant aux étourderies , fautes d'inattention! La dernière phrase est également bien pensée...
CL 4/5, Structure id 5/5; voc 3,5/5, Originalité 4/5
16,5/20
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