Last week, an enormous piece of Antarcti(que)c's ice floe broke down. "The tray is totally disloquating because of (the) global warming" (have) said (the )scientists.
What will happen if we don't change our behavior ? What should we do to protect the planet ?
Since the twentieth century, the scientists have recorded temperatures and the warmest year of all was 2005. The situation is alarming and the time is counted. If nobody reacts, all the ice floe will melt and the sea level will rise: as a consequence, the countries like Florida, Shangai or New-York will be under water. Everywhere the temperatures are increasing and it provokes lots of storms and hurricanes, especially in United-States.
We must use more green energies and less cars which pollute and product greenhouse gas. But on the top of this, each one must reduce his energy consumption.
We have to act together if we want to save to save our planet.
Sebastien Belis 3C
Très bon article Sébastien avec une illustration très pertinente ... l'ensemble est correct le sujet est réellement questionné, et l'emploi du present perfect maîtrisé! je ne peux que t'encourager à continuer...
CL 5/5; Structure id 4/5; voc 3/5, Originalité 4,5/5
16,5/20
What will happen if we don't change our behavior ? What should we do to protect the planet ?
Since the twentieth century, the scientists have recorded temperatures and the warmest year of all was 2005. The situation is alarming and the time is counted. If nobody reacts, all the ice floe will melt and the sea level will rise: as a consequence, the countries like Florida, Shangai or New-York will be under water. Everywhere the temperatures are increasing and it provokes lots of storms and hurricanes, especially in United-States.
We must use more green energies and less cars which pollute and product greenhouse gas. But on the top of this, each one must reduce his energy consumption.
We have to act together if we want to save to save our planet.
Sebastien Belis 3C
Très bon article Sébastien avec une illustration très pertinente ... l'ensemble est correct le sujet est réellement questionné, et l'emploi du present perfect maîtrisé! je ne peux que t'encourager à continuer...
CL 5/5; Structure id 4/5; voc 3/5, Originalité 4,5/5
16,5/20
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