Global Warming : An insult has our Earth

Why (the) DO Global Warming take place? Who are (is)responsable? What (are the) consequences?

The Earth is in (getting) warm(ing) beacuse of the Global Warming!

(The) Global Warming is provoqu(k)ed by Us. The big industry reject an enormous quantity of CO2 every year. This gaz in effect greenhouse (is on the base of) causes the (elevation) rise in (of the) temperatures.

This elevation (rise) have (has) consequence terrible (ordre) on (the) nature : the ice field are breaking down, the sea level are (is) rising, species are endangering(ed). If the sea level increases, we so invade by the water.(=>water will invade the earth)

If the animals dead (verb = die), the Earth would not look like (any more in) Earth anymore but (look like) to an very enormous industry. (The) Global Warming changes climate(s) too, this change provoque cyclone ( Katrina ) who(which) ha(ve)s terrible repercussions(consequences) on the human.



For (to) stop(ped) (the) Global Warming, we can utilise (use) biotechnology, renouvable (renewable) energies and we have the duty of (to) forget the money and (to) know of(the) Earth.

Clément Garnier 3°C

Bon effort dans l'ensemble Clément, mais il y a encore trop de mots en français !!! Quel dommage!!
Tu dois veiller à l'ordre des mots dans la phrase (adj + nom) et aussi : jamais FOR + verbe !!!
Les idées sont bonnes et j'apprécie ton effort de n'avoir pas recopié des expressions toutes faites piochées dans les traducteurs.
Donc attention aux structure sde la phrase et continue!
CL 2,5/5 ; Struct id 4/5; voc 3/5 ; orig 3,5/5
13/20