collapse of the arctique

greenhouse effect augments while we do not react
what will happen(ed) if we do not act ?


the earth got warme(d)r (it self) about 0,6°C during these last 100 years. During this periode, the synthetic programs of greenhouse gas (about) augmented, to a great extent owing to the scald of fossil fuels and deforestation. During these last 20 years, the anxiety according to which these two phenomena would be, at last partly, linked mutually, augments.
that is to say, (the) global warming is now considered as being the result of the emplification(???) of greenhouse effect


if we do not act, the known glaciers and the imensity of floe will melt. there fore, several consequences are going to arrive (tsunami,etc.....)

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Tu ne t'es pas vraiment approprié le sujet il manque un réel et profond questionnement! L'ensemble est trop descriptif en tous cas la mise en forme de l'article ne souligne pas suffisament le questionnement ou la problématique.
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