Barack obama vs Hilary clinton

The comfortable national advantage which had barack obama on hilary Clinton in running has the American presidence (struture) are (have) in practice vanished and two démoncrates are dévancés by the republican john mc cain, to a new opinion poll reuters / zogby.
Obama does not have more than three points (anymore) beforehand on Clinton (47%contre44 %), while he had it jusqu' has (until)14 in February apres (to) have(ing) gathered in ten successive wins, points out this opinion poll.
The senator of the Illinois was weakened these last weeks by Clinton, who called into question his capacity (has) to hold the role of commander-in - chief of armies, and and by deep reactions to purposes arsonists of its ancient pastor of known Chicago rle racism.
Mainteant rest has wait...

virginie dasilva 3c

Beaucoup trop d'expressions en français Virginie, aucun mot ne doit apparaître en français dans tes rédactions!!
De plus les constructions sont parfois cahotiques ... (traducteurs???)
Tu pouvais faire des phrases plus simples avec les mêmes idées, encore une fois simplifie toi la tâche lorsque tu écris en anglais!
CL 2/5; Struc id 4/5; voc 1/5; Originalité 2/5
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